Question: What can I improve in my writing?

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Answer #1:

Everything. |:

Answer #2:

Every time another person starts talking, another paragraph is started.

I didn't read it, but there's always room for improvement.

Answer #3:

Alright... How do I put this nicely...

Err, it's rubbish.

Yeah I know, not very nice. But, you are young, you have time to improve.
Make sure you have these key elements in your plot:
-Description (SHOW, do not tell)
-Well developed characters (google "character analysis. If if comes up for RPG's, that's fine, I've used those with success)
-Thought out plot (make sure you aren't writing just to write, like know where you are going with things and stuff like that. If you need to, plan EVERYTHING out.)
-No Mary-Sue's.
-A beginning, middle, and end
-Better adjectives
-You don't need to put middle/last names, either...
-You need to learn how you layout a story. Every dialogue is considered a new paragraph, so when you are writing you need to click "enter", then "tab", then repeat and keep writing.

If you have any more questions, feel free to email me. You have a lot to work on. Pay attention in english class!!

Answer #4:

submit some article to article plat.and look their guide.





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